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Post by mpollock on Nov 26, 2015 6:00:29 GMT -5
Morning everyone,
Thanks to those of you who took the time to complete this task. I am about to post these with comments about what they would achieve.
To those of you who did not complete it:
The next time that we do a task like this, I'm afraid that I will not be posting it to everyone. It is unfair that others are doing the work and people who are not continue to benefit from their hard work. This is the last time that this will happen. Be warned.
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Post by mpollock on Nov 26, 2015 6:03:51 GMT -5
This example would achieve 8 marks because: - Extract comment is a little thin (If this is likely to be you doing this, give 2 examples from the extract and analyse) - 1 - 2nd example from the rest of the book is a little thin as well - 1
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Post by mpollock on Nov 26, 2015 6:04:30 GMT -5
This example is likely to achieve the full 10 marks.
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Post by mpollock on Nov 26, 2015 6:07:05 GMT -5
This example would achieve 7 marks because: - The extract comment is a little thin. (For people like this, give 2 examples from the extract) -1 - They have not given their 3rd elsewhere example -2
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Post by mpollock on Nov 26, 2015 6:07:35 GMT -5
This example is likely to achieve 10 marks.
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Post by mpollock on Dec 1, 2015 6:35:22 GMT -5
This answer would achieve 7/10 because some of the analysis for 'Elsewhere' isn't being put into context with the novel (e.g. What is happening at that point? Why is that important?)
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Post by mpollock on Dec 1, 2015 6:43:58 GMT -5
This response would have 7/10 as it doesn't always put the elsewhere comments into context (i.e. What is happening? Why is it important?)
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